Subject: Self Introduction Dear Professor Blackstone, My name is Chin Yue Feng, I am writing this to introduce myself as a student in your communication module. I graduated from Ngee Ann Polytechnic with a degree in Environmental and Water Technology from the School of Life Sciences. Originally I planned to start working once I finished my national service, but my friends and family convinced my it would be better to try to get into university and study before going out to work. I chose to study a civil engineering degree as it would broaden my job options when I graduate. My strength in communication is listening to what the other parties are saying. I tend to be very quite and prefer to listen to what others say. When others talk, I can remember what they say clearly although I do not talk much. This has led to many awkward taxi rides where the driver talks about random things in their life. I am able to speak comfortably to people my age, but for people who are older than me, I...
The paraphrasing is good and I could understand what you are trying to put across. I too agree that engineers will need to understand clearly on the task at hand before they are able to lead the team or explain to the audience in a way that they will be able to understand.
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ReplyDeleteI just read your paraphrase and I love your view and understanding on what Debra Kraft had mentioned. Your points are clear and valid.
Cheers,
Ian Marc
Hi Yue Feng, the paraphrasing is similar as mine and I believe we have the same view on what the Debra Kraft meant.
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